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William R. Boyer's avatar

Great song just got even better, thanks to your important edits. Reminds me how Elvis added a line to Mac Davis's (!?) "In the Ghetto" ("And his mama cried. . .").

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Mother Magpie's avatar

Oh look, now the verse is about Rich Men. Like it says on the tin.

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jo beall's avatar

love your adaptations - now, i totally resonate with the song

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